#1
something short and simple i came up with at work today - let me know what you think - i need some verses to go with the chorus

The Good Days:

chorus
The good times
And bad times
Im sick of
My own rhymes

We made it work anyway

I remember
How time flys
The now is here
The past has died

But I'll still remember always
Those were the good days
#3
I like it man. For the verses just go through really good or bad times that stick with you and then you have the choruses and then that a solid song. I'm hearing an acoustic/piano song in my head. Keep it up.
#5
i'll admit, yes- a little cliche (but have you seen some of the other songs on this website?)