#1
This is a song I'm starting and I wanted to see if I should try to finish it.

If you think I should continue it, tell me what direction I should go in and what kind of transition on can make in between what I have and what I might make. What should I do with the lead...etc...

Crit for Crit. Thanks for all constructive comments. Well any I guess.
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WIP.zip
Last edited by guitarguy5515 at Jul 23, 2006,
#3
damn the intro was really cool, had a classical feel to it imo, but the rest was really cool to, you have a great start, post it when its done, i want to here it, crit any of mine, there in my sig, thanks!
#6
I liked how it starts out, and how the bass comes in. Nice rhythm too. But when the lead comes in, I think it's a little too sudden, just IMO.

Cant wait to here it finished.
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