#1
FETICIDE

As the spider eats her larvae
So we do the same
Wash our hands like Pontius
And turn our backs on the blame
We dress as devils and play God
Without tender hearts we murder our spawn
It's all relative
There is no right or wrong

Creation is no great feat
Whatever we make
We unmake in a heartbeat

The origin decides what lives and what dies
Questions the identity of human life
There are shades of gray
When it all should be black and white
A million voices beg for a chance
All they ever wanted
Was the same one we had

Creation is no great feat
Whatever we make
We unmake in a heartbeat
#2
Truthfully, I'm a bit confused. I don't know whether it's because I don't get the song, or I'm just getting too tired for this stuff tonight lol. I think it rolled okay though, I just don't completely get the message right now. I'll revise it in the morning. Who am I kidding. I don't wake up in mornings!
#3
i understood it
sounds really good
"wash our hands like Pontius and turn our backs on the blame" - love it
#4
This is fantastic. Its true. We've been given such a great chance in life and all humanity has done is ruin it. Great job. keep it up.
#5
I had no idea what the hell you were talking about with the first two lines, but the rest of the song made sense to me. It's very true, and very well written IMO. I especially like
"We dress as devils and play God
Without tender hearts we murder our spawn
It's all relative
There is no right or wrong"

Great lines there, good song overall. Keep it up