There's a ton of clipping when the clean guitar plays faster.

The singing is just plain not good. I'm not sure if it's the type of music or what, but I didn't like them at all. Also the guitar doesn't seem to support the singing at all when it picks up.

The tapping part at 1:08 is sick though, real nice job on that.

The riff at about 3:20 sounds pretty good. And the way it picks up is cool. I was hoping for a big solo there but the way you put in the solo was good too.

Basically all of the bends are out of tune, make sure you're bending up to a note.

The runs are messy but some of them sound good.

Yeah, pretty much the biggest problem is the singing and I think you should re-record the solo too.

Crit mine please?