#1
Me And my friend wrote this. crit 4crit


Verse 1
What is the feeling when you speak?
Why does it get so hard to breath?
All my friends say its love
But I say im too young
Verse1

Verse2
When the falling sensation goes away
And theres no one else but you and me
Im afraid I wont speak the truth
If it happens ?we? wont ever be
Verse2

Chorus
live the day as if it was you last
so we dont need to worry if it doesnt last

so raise up your glass,
but not too fast and be
quick too cheer and buy
your friend a couple o' beers
Chorus

Verse2
So im too afraid too say
but you can see what it is
that always seems too trouble me
Verse2

Chorus
live the day as if it was you last
so we dont need to worry if it doesnt last

so raise up your glass,
but not too fast and be
quick too cheer and buy
your friend a couple o' beers

so raise up your glass,
but not too fast and be
quick too cheer and buy
your friend a couple o' beers
Chorus

Bridge
Live life and have fun
Don?t mope around and wish
Jump up and get out and run
Don?t turn to me you?ll fall to the ground
Bridge

Chorus
live the day as if it was you last
so we dont need to worry if it doesnt last

so raise up your glass,
but not too fast and be
quick too cheer and buy
your friend a couple o' beers
#3
Great song, great message.

''live the day as if it was you last
so we dont need to worry if it doesnt last''

Legendary line.
#4
agreeing with them^, and adding really good song, and emphasising really good chorus

if youre critting back, link in sig
#5
Really good song. I like the chorus, espitally the lines:

so raise up your glass,
but not too fast and be
quick too cheer and buy
your friend a couple o' beers
#6
I agree, I like every thing but the first two lines in the chorus where they both end in last. Try to have a different word or a different line and it be great.