First my cons: The recording quality is pretty dark and i think the acoustic needs more beef to it. I think the song may have worked out better with one voice, like when the two voices are saying different things.

Now my pros: Not a bad progression. Although not my slyle, the vocals aren't that bad overall, with a full band it could be a really good song. I like the slower feel in the chorus

overall, nice job

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Hey, starting out the guitars pretty quiet and could use to be turned up a bit but overall its fine. I think you should try it without the doubled voices and maybe vocals turned up a little louder but still good. Fine acoustic work no mess ups I could tell. Over all pretty good. Reminds me of Elliot Smith whos amazing
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