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Hey guys i browse UG quite a bit , and i've seen many of the good pieces put up here in the lyrical section , and the good critique yall give as well. Was wondering if yall could give this a quick read. : ) thanks.


Odds.


picture , this poison
in the bottle , yet again it turns to wine.
and once again , i'm stuck between my head
and this heart screems for something more.
some more meaning.
and all these metaphors are getting me upset
i can't depict life through them , anymore
but yet , forever as this feeling grows
this heart explodes
and yet again
to bury me from your life
sorry love, im just another disease
a waste of breathe unable to grab meaning
i know i lead to something i shouldn't
but something inside me just wont listen.

(chorus)
Be carefull who your dying for
odds are, they wouldn't die for you
now see, you see it more clearly
odds are she might jsut be a wh*re
sit back and take this blow to the heart
your hands are shaking
yeah ,your hands are shaking
trust me, it only gets worse.

grab a gasp of air
before this passion takes ahold of you
snap back , you know it only lasts for a while
until you leave this heart wide open again
i'm losing all blood flow, how can any d*mn girl
be so f*cking heartless.
yeah i said it
be so f*cking heartless.

Be carefull who your dying for
odds are, they wouldn't die for you
now see, you see it more clearly
odds are she might jsut be a wh*re
sit back and take this blow to the heart
your hands are shaking
yeah ,your hands are shaking
trust me, it only gets worse.

So it's pouring outside
remember those nights we sung along
to the radio, had it up so high
drowned out your screems to the night sky
dreamed of dreams out of reach
i held you so close
to make sure you'd never lose hope , in us.
but it faded away
you left , i stayed.
and you're jsut trying so hard to give... up.

Be carefull who your dying for
odds are, they wouldn't die for you
now see, you see it more clearly
odds are she might jsut be a wh*re
sit back and take this blow to the heart
your hands are shaking
yeah ,your hands are shaking
trust me, it only gets worse.

to see those blue eyes turn to grey
to say you still havn't missed me yet
now that you show me your true colors
i think i can move on, keep on movin on
cause you were nothing in the first place.