I just started learning this and I wanted to see what you guys thought.
Last edited by JJK at Jul 25, 2006,
I updated it.
Added a video.
For starters, you got most of the notes right. But there were some parts where you weren't using the full chords that you needed to be. And it sounds really choppy and emotionless. You need to work on being really smooth and fluid, especially when the melody starts. But you've got the basis of it down, now you just need to work on making it sound better.
the notes are correct, and your timing is correct, but it really doesnt have any feeling, like it sounds like someone made you learn that song and play it.
Yeah I understand the fluidity part. I just started learning it so I'm sure I'll improve in that regard.
I updated the video again with a new one I just recorded. Does it sound any better?