#1
this is a kinda fast song with hard riffs that i came up with today.
take a look and give me your comments , advice and critisism .
All comments are welcome , including the harsh ones.
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#3
First off not my type of music but still a good recording and good quality. Drums could have used to a little more interesting and symbles could have sounded a bit better. Guitar tone could have been better but still worked. But all in all good recording could use some vocals and not just incoherant screaming or grumbling.

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#4
ooo man nice little solo riffing, very clean i like it :-D you need to double up those drums though defenitly, to give it the thrash beat. or raise the tempo up 50. pretty sweet ass riffing though, loved all the riffs. pretty good writing too, with the transitions and all, you should add vocals to this, that would be sexy. and also, the crash cymbol sounds amazing

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#5
I cannot add vocals cause i cant write lyrics or vocal lines or anything . i have asked many times for help but ....
anyway , i'll go crit yours asap.
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#6
very nice and thrashy... big thumbs up on the riffage... the tone isnt really to my liking, but it couldnt possibly fault the playing. i agree some vocals on this song would have been killer . the drums sound good... gotta love the double bass. the outro was great, overall good job. thanks for checking out my song too.