#1
um yea did this in like 2 hours
so crit it please

http://www.purevolume.com/guitarplaya27

the lyrics are
The Fallen... Are the Ones who Shine So bright
The Fallen... Are the Ones who Fly so High
The Living see the Light
The Living See Eeternity
We Rise
We Seek
For A life in the Fallen
We Fall
We Live
We Wake them All TonIGHT!

only 1 minutes and 47 seconds of crap so yea
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#3
i was actually going for hardcore vocals but yea
it was still me trying to scream
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#4
:/ I didn't like the screaming, it didn't have enough "oomph" in it, keep working on your voice... In like the first half, The lead wasn't good at all, it didn't seem like it was in the same key as the rythm, it was pretty sloppy playing. The guitar playing was a little better in the second half, but the vocals still need work. Sorry, it sounded pretty mediocre... its spelled "eternity" just to let you know :p
#5
lol

ya i cant play lead for **** so **** it

how was the rythym guitar though???
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#7
sweet yes

s i made a cool riff

ok work on the lead parts, better more fitting solo

and singing needs more what in it
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Orange Dual Terror
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