#1
crit 4 crit as always . thanks . and i need a new title . i just hate putting untitled up there


These insignificant, encounters have these
memories, flooding back to me
your always tryin to impress
but you just become more of a distress to me
you said youd keep in touch
you love me soo... much
but no phone calls in months
you still swear, that nothing you did was wrong

Always hidden behind, a facade of make-up
your always made up
and now so is my mind.
i may have pulled this trigger once before
but now the safety's on, and im aiming you
straight out the door

And the thing thats so, sad about this
is that every single time we have kissed
has gone to waste now, all thanks to you
Ms. Personality, Ms. Popularity
Ms. Who the hell's the real you ?

This summer its, time for a change
I need to, rearrange
so your out of my life for good
all the time we spent, together was
useless.
those years of my life are wasted
they can never be reclaimed

And the thing thats so, sad about this
is that every single time we have kissed
has gone to waste now, all thanks to you
Ms. Personality, Ms. Popularity
Ms. Who the hell's the real you ?

You instilled, false hopes upon me
and your just like a drug
trying your best not to fade
but in this I'll help you out
i will be your aid
and just like a drug, you made me think
that i needed you
but in the blink, of an eye
i realized that i never knew you

And the thing thats so, sad about this
is that every single time we have kissed
has gone to waste now, all thanks to you
Ms. Personality, Ms. Popularity
Ms. Who the hell's the real you ?
#2
Omg I love it man. My favorite line is ms. personality, ms. popularity, ms. who the hell is the real you. Perfect. The song doesn't have any noticeable flaws to me. Great job. I think Unknown would actually be a decent title for this.lol. No seriously
#4
Nice song, strong lyrics, not too soft
And -indeed- Unknown is a good title for this song
Keep up the good work!
xXx
(Crit: Good Boys Will Always Wear Pink)
*So Testosterone Boys &nd Harlequin Girls, Will You Dance To This Beat And Hold A Lover Close? *