#1
this is a slow acoustic song.... it's not the greatest song but i would appreciate any feed back.

My life, my love, my everything

I hope you know that
You mean everything to me
I hope you understand one day
Why it's so hard for me to believe
I know you tell me
Over and over again
But it's so hard for me to believe
Why your not just a friend
I never felt this way before
About someone else and
All I know is that I
Never want this day to end

I know i've said it before
I always seem to use this line
But it's different with you
Fear of being used this time
I try to tell you
How much I care
But the words wont come out
God I get so scared
Please believe me
It's not tha i don't trust you
But I love you so much
What else can I do

Please know that I will always be there to here your call and
Please know that I will always pick you up when you fall
You know that all this bull**** it don't mean a thing
Your my life, my love, your my everything

I know it's hard for you
To express how you feel
I am the same way
It's easier to conceal
And now i've finnally found
Away for me to show
Everything I feel and
Everything I know
I try to tell you it all
But it all sounds so wrong
And that is why
I'm writting you this song

Please know that I will always be there to here your call and
Please know that I will always pick you up when you fall
You know that all this bull**** it don't mean a thing
Your my life, my love, your my everything
#2
Nice song. Not splendid, but still...
Maybe the lyrics are a bit too repetitive
xXx
*So Testosterone Boys &nd Harlequin Girls, Will You Dance To This Beat And Hold A Lover Close? *
#3
Lots and lots of cliche. Look at your song from this perspective, no one cares how you feel because it's already been said. Tell us how you feel in an original way that's entertaining. 5/10