#1
Another sappy love song, but ahhh well lol. I imagine this one being in a sort of stone roses kinda style.

Anything for you.

{Verse 1}
Crossing oceans, mountains high,
There is no one anywhere,
That could mean the same things and I swear,
We shall never be apart.
Moving stars they?re in the sky,
The golden shimmer of her hair,
Her gorgeous smile, I can?t help but stare,
She?ll be forever in my heart.

{Chorus}
I see her face it makes me smile,
And ill spend a little while,
Trying to show her how I feel. (I love you)
And I adore her every move,
I spend my time trying to prove,
What I feel for her is real. (I love you)

{Verse 2}
I dry her eyes ill stay right here,
Ill hold her close til morning light,
Won?t let go all through the night,
So much joy to watch her sleep.
I hope she sees its now so clear,
I?ll never let go, just hold her tight,
I?m the one, I?ll treat her right,
Her love I feel, endlessly deep.

{Chorus}
I see her face it makes me smile,
And ill spend a little while,
Trying to show her how I feel. (I love you)
And I adore her every move,
I spend my time trying to prove,
What I feel for her is real. (I love you)

{Verse 3}
So much more than just a game,
Take my hand we?ll soar so high,
The warmth of love lies deep inside,
And she?ll try to picture me.
I ask her now to take my name,
The spark we have, forever alive,
In her warm embrace, that?s where I lie,
By her side, for all eternity.

{Chorus}
I see her face it makes me smile,
And ill spend a little while,
Trying to show her how I feel. (I love you)
And I adore her every move,
I spend my time trying to prove,
What I feel for her is real. (I love you)

{Solo}

{Chorus}
I see her face it makes me smile,
And ill spend a little while,
Trying to show her how I feel. (I love you)
And I adore her every move,
I spend my time trying to prove,
What I feel for her is real. (I love you)
#2
This is another love song, but it's OK
The chorus is a bit repetitive... But I like it anyway.
Keep up the good work!
xXx
(Crit for crit?)
*So Testosterone Boys &nd Harlequin Girls, Will You Dance To This Beat And Hold A Lover Close? *
#3
Wow feels like I could copy and paste all my crits today.

I'm sorry but I didn't like it at all. The song is bursting with bad cliches and the chorus sounds like it was written by a 1950's doo-wop band. Also everything is so direct, it sounds like you just fell in love yesterday and just want to tell the world, good for you, bad for us.