#1
The recording kinda sucks especially the little acoustic part, we just came up with a random name for it so i probably will be changed, we dont have drums recorded but i wrote some on the computer so it should work. anyways, crit for crit
the link is in my sig
According to wiki FAP really stands for familial adenomatous polyposis, a type of colon cancer.
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Ibanez SZ720
Randall RG75D
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Me Playing Stuff: Here
#2
i think its got a really good inventive beginning to the song, and a great feel all over but i find it a bit too pop punk for my liking. i think the guitar sound is too trebley, more grunt would sound better, its not clear enough.

you need to get some vocals on there.

its good stuff i do like it, its tight.

keep it up
#3
thx, anyone else....
According to wiki FAP really stands for familial adenomatous polyposis, a type of colon cancer.
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Ibanez SZ720
Randall RG75D
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Me Playing Stuff: Here
#4
Please, at least a couple more people comment/listen...
According to wiki FAP really stands for familial adenomatous polyposis, a type of colon cancer.
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Ibanez SZ720
Randall RG75D
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Me Playing Stuff: Here