#1
So I just recorded Karma Police in one take. I know that I make a few mistakes in the guitar playing and my singing is off a little and not that strong (especially at the end "I lost myself" bit) and also the sound is crap......but I'd still like to know what everyone thinks.


Crit for crit if you want.


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#2
The singing is very monotone...if you wanted it that way, ok, but it would be better if you sang it somewhat higher and louder. The 'mess' in 'when you mess with us' could be a bit more powerful, as does the 'for a minute there...' etc, that's the hook of the song. The playing is good, however, except for the last part...you changed your rhythm and then sped up.
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#3
ok...thanks...I knew I needed to do something with the singing. And the end bit was pretty bad, I know......I'm gonna fix it, I just wanted some advice first to make it better.

Thanks!


EDIT: I just listened again and at about 50 seconds a door opens and closes in my house.
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Last edited by the_experience at Jul 25, 2006,