#1
Hey guys, I wrote this about my second half she means so freaking much to me I have yet to write a song about exactly how I feel about her, I hope you like it. It's a different form then I usually write something different from my original style. but let me know please. God Bless<333


So Happy Birthday, To This Girl.

V1:
Seventeen years, its not much time,
How could some one be through so much,
Along that line?
So just for you, on this day, my best wishes to the best of a friend?

Chorus:
So happy birthday to the girl, happy birthday to my world
The one that never ceases to amaze me,
That makes my day when she says, ?boy, you?re crazy?

V2:
So here?s a little thank you song from me to you
For every time you?ve been there, for every letter,
And for every kiss you gave me,
They made me feel so much better.

Chorus:
So happy birthday to the girl, happy birthday to my world
The one that never ceases to amaze me,
That makes my day when she says, ?boy, you?re crazy?

Bridge:
And to this day, you?re the reason that I pray,
You?re the map that God used to find me, and I?m so glad,
He gave me such an incredible friend. Let?s be the best we?ve ever had?

Chorus:
So happy birthday to the girl, happy birthday to my world
The one that never ceases to amaze me,
That makes my day when she says, ?boy, you?re crazy?
#2
this would probably go over better then just the happy bday song... a line i dont really like its the you never cease to amaze me thing. How many people have honestly said that :P anyways you make me wish i cared about someone that much haha... if your returning 'my journal and reality' in sig.
#6
It's great...gets the message out clear...nice flow...a bit sweet...but thats allowed for such songs...
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#8
That's really cute, she should like it, make sure she is really into God like you though or that can always be a little awkward. And I think that the amaze me line was used creatively enough for it to sound good. It should be a very nice song for her.

If you have time I always like a crit, I haven't gotten one from someone who understands it yet. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=402453
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