#1
hi

one of our own songs. hope you like it. it was recorded a while ago on audacity with an electric drum kit, but hopefully its not too bad!!!

anyway let us know what you think of it and if you want us to crit your work just let us know.

http://slouchinoutfit.dmusic.com/
#4
wasnt too bad, nothing that stood out too much, the chorus was pretty cool, the verses seemed like u were struggling to keep on time with the guitar, maybe cut the tempo down a little.
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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