#1
just a song i was working on. i have a chorus but i just didnt tab it out.
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Last edited by nexteyenate at Jul 25, 2006,
#2
That was definately interesting. The part in bar four sound really good until you used that D# power chord over the D (the 068). Honestly man that chord sound horrible.. if you fix that then that whole part will sound good. Also in the end every time you used an A in the lead (the 7 on the D string) it sounded clashy. Just my opinions, good song.
#3
i fixed that ****ty chord, but i cant figure out what to use instead of that 7..hmm....
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#4
Well I didnt particularly like the first half or so maybe it sounds beter with the actual delay effect. Tthat ending was real cool, and catchy.
Last edited by CrashAndBurn at Jul 26, 2006,
#5
that sounds like a tool song, not bad
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