#1
Kinda off the wall
I think it sounds like a mix of Hatebreed and Strapping Young Lad
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Last edited by metalmania91 at Jul 26, 2006,
#2
A little way............. way........... way too repetitive. Good, but not good enough...
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#3
i see you refuse to use drop d tastefully... and also refuse not to play all powerchords. the riffs were okay tho, nuhting super original, and a word of advice if u dont try to be original u wont sound original. dont settle for the first classic metal riff u write, and attempt a little more rhythm?
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#4
very average, dosent really sound like hatebreed and sound anything like syl, sorry, keep on tryin tho brother, we were all there and i probably still am!
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#5
^ agrees with Spark1284 on the originality comment, but it wasnt bad, just repetetive, lol, just try to throw yourself in there, as corny as that sounds, lol, i liked it though, crit any of mine if you get a chance, thanks, there all in my sig
#6
Hmm. Kind of repetitive and sounds kind of dragged out if you know what i mean. The endings sounds a bit odd but i guess it sounds better on an actual guitar rather than just the pc.
#7
It was okay but it was a little repetitive and boring really. I didnt like the Chorus, it didnt really sound that great at all. It would be better if you would make your Pre-Chorus ur Chorus and your chorus....like a bridge or something.
#8
I dont like the way is seems all metal is just drop d repeatedly hitting power chords and this didnt reaslly sound any different from any other metal but then again i dont like metal maybe someone who does woukd like it more... check out mine if you have guitar pro
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#9
I dont like the intro. It seems dull; boring.

I like the verse though. Very pounding. I can hear the double bass already.

In the pre-chorus, the last bar, instead of hammering-on from 5 to 6, I think you should pull-off. And also, on the lowest string, you made the 6 a artificial harmonic. I dunno if you meant to do that, but it doesn't sound too good.

On the first staff of the chorus, the last measure where it plays the 5 to the 7; the 7 sounds really out of place. I like the sound of the 2 there, but that's just my opinion. The rest of the chorus sounds good, especially the last few measures.

Breakdown sounds good. I like that pretty well.

Overall this is really good. I really enjoyed it.
There's just a few notes that I've already mentioned that I would change, and other than that, it sounds great. Good job.

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#10
it was alright.

try and throw some pinch harmonics here and there to make it less repetitive, and i think a solo would improve this song a lot
#11
It seemed really generic and bland. Kinda like a plain hamburger: It's not disgusting, but you're definitely missing out on the good stuff. I suggest adding another guitar part and reworking the chorus. A solo could do wonders as well.