#1
Hey everybody this is one of my
newest and im done working on the music
for it....it has a metal sound to it
if u have any ideas feel free to share!crit4crit

''Dark Desires''

Coming in from all around
Taking away her innocence
Numb inside
Through the fear inside
And all the feelings left inside

Coming in from all around
Taking away........

Used as a place for desires
As an object of pleasures
Reduced to what makes her
Almost nothing

Scream for me, Come to me

Numb inside
Through the fear inside
And all the feelings left inside

These dark desires leave
Her by herself
These dark desires keep
Her to herself

Scream for me, Come to me
#2
Good job, i can feel the emotion by just reading the song. Thanx for crit mine.
#3
Damn, those were some dark lyrics. I liked them. I really enjoyed reading this piece. It made me think a lot. Keep up the good work.

Crit mine please

Paradise