#1
Hi. This a song from my band. we're from portugal, lisbon.check out our songs at http://www.purevolume.com/ic19 and post a coment pleaz...

I wrote this after daydreaming in the classroom... crit4crit

Verse:
I walk this desert miles around
Nothing moves I don't hear a sound
To God I prey but I get no answer
Please save me Limbo Dancer

I scream out loud can hear my cry
I know you well you're not shy
A thousand preys but I get no answer
Please save me Limbo Dancer

Chorus:
Dreams of sorrow, come through my head
Take me out, of this Limbo Land
Tales of you, cross my mind
Take me out, I'm deaf and blind

Verse:
I walk this desert miles around
Nothing moves I don't hear a sound
To God I prey but I get no answer
Please save me Limbo Dancer

I scream out loud can hear my cry
I know you well you're not shy
A thousand preys but I get no answer
Please save me Limbo Dancer

hear at the link above. its with a female voice, a friend of ours accepted to record it woth us.
#3
Nice song you got going here. It's very unique and original. I thought the words were very good. By the way, your band is very talented. Good luck.

Crit mine please

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