#1
this is an acoustic song ive been working on for a few days, its soft and slow


Our summer is gone to little to late
the days are growing shorter
the nights are getting colder
We make our mistakes but never seem to learn them
we turn away and close our eyes
pretend shes wrong and somehow we're right


ive lost the thoughts that keep me safe
that keep me warm and dry in this place
and im, wondering how long it will take
for you to turn and run, turn and run away


can you recall, the times we once shared
the lights keep getting dimmer
we just cant seem to remember
the faces seem misplaced like a broken jigsaw puzzle
but the more i stare the more it seems
that every face just looks like me


I've lost the thoughts that keep me safe
that keep me warm in dry in this place
and I'm, wondering how long it will take
for you to turn and run. turn and run away


(outro kinda soft)
I'll leave you now so you can sleep
and maybe you will dream of me
my hope is faded and misplaced
i knew it all would go to waste
i wish this summer had one more day
so i could say what we need to say
Originally posted by the best of...
Vin Diesel was once asked if he believed in the idea of reincarnation. His response was simply "I used to be a plate of pancakes."
#2
Nice song you got here. It paints a good picture in my head. I liked the flow of it and the rhyming scheme was unique. BTW, I like the quote in your sig.

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#3
I dont suppose i could convince anyone to actually post on this could i?
Originally posted by the best of...
Vin Diesel was once asked if he believed in the idea of reincarnation. His response was simply "I used to be a plate of pancakes."
#4
good song. it would be great slow acoustic

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