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Hey i just finished this 5 min. ago so its
a rough draft so i need alot of crits!
its a much happier one than the previous....enjoy!

''Too Late''

When your eyes smiled at me
I tried to look away
But i was fixtated
And i knew then that
You had made me yours

I was out on a lonely day
I was down in my own way
I was trying to get away
Just when i passed your way
I walked by you just close
Enough to catch a glimpse of you

You pulled me in and
You became mine
And when i told you
I spoke with my eyes closed
So i wouldnt fall in love with you
But it was already too late

I grew deeper and deeper
Into you as we lay together
With nothing to talk
About except ourselves
I held you closer
as the night grew, cuz i knew
You would leave and
The night would end
But its nights like these
That should never pass

You pulled me in and
You became mine
And when i told you
I spoke with my eyes closed
So i wouldnt fall in love with you
But it was already too late