#1
this is all i got so far.. i need help on verse two but tell me wat u think so far
Verse one:
Your nose is so high that if it rains you'll drown.
uptight over little things.
Up all night over stupid things.
You worry about your kids too much!!

chorus:
Just relax,unwind you need to listen to me.
your to stuck up,and if you dont change thts all that you'll ever be.
Your a walkin victom of life!!
#2
I particularly liked the first line of the verse. I enjoyed the lighted-hearted tone of this song. After reading so many depressing songs (mine included), this is a breath of fresh air. As a suggestion for the second verse, you could talk about how the person was not always uptight and that she used to be fun-loving and a party girl and the narrator is trying to tell her this. In fact you could have the narrator be her husband.

Crit mine please

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