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I wrote this about a month ago. I just got everything worked out to where I'm happy with it, but I want to know what other people think. Crit mine, and I'll crit yours. Thanks.


I Let You

I don?t know who you are anymore
You used to be my friend
You made me realize who I wasn?t
But I still don?t know who I am
You were my only one
You were my wings
I gave you all you ever wanted
I give you everything

I let you hide, my friend
I let you inside
I let you hide, my friend
You let the feeling die

I want to love you, but it?s hard to
With this knife in my back
I want to hate you, but it?s hard to
When I keep coming back

What was I worth to you?
Was I of any use?
I did everything for you
Even took your goddamn abuse
Is that all you have to say to me?
After all I?ve been through?
It?s a lot to do for nothing
But I ****ing did it for you

I let you hide, my friend
I let you inside
I let you hide, my friend
You let the feeling die

You?ve got me wrapped around your finger
Well, I hope you?re never free
Because your memory still lingers
And it meant everything to me

I know I?m not important enough
To be held on to
Well I hope that you know
I ****ing held on to you
Nothing?s turning out like I planned
Nothing ever does
Everything that I am
Is different from what I was

I let you hide, my friend
I let you inside
I let you hide, my friend
You let the feeling die

I let you hide, my friend
I let you inside
I let you hide, my friend
Wish I could let you die