It is a good start, but defiantly needs work. Your voice will work for the song perfectly tone wise, but you sounds like you keep moving away from the mic. The main problem I hear is your timing, (you keep making pauses in you playing/singing) if you can nail that, then you will have improved on it drastically. Like I said though, good start.
this wasent that great sorry, first off the guitar was off time and at some parts even stopped playing, dont sweat that, this is a hard song with all the complicated finger picking practice the -bass note, bass note, strum, walkdown- technique that ben gibberd uses in the song. the vocals were ok, they sounded a little forced, and be careful about your distance in relation to the microphone, good work and keep at it my good man!

if you feel grateful enough to critque back it would be much appriciated