#1
soo...i have a friend...he writes lyrics...do these look like decent lyrics...or are they not good? i need crit

Never met before
Never seen you here
I've got a feeling
I've got a fear
I'll make a move
Maybe touch your heart
Fate brought it together
Fate will take it apart

This encounter won't keep us long
It's so innocent but it feels so wrong
Maybe I'll see you again
Or we'll go our own ways

We grow so close
In so little time
Watch us talk
The eagerness climb
This won't last long
But let's make it count
It's not about quality
It's about the amount

If this was meant to last
It wouldn't have gone so fast
#2
Hmm, It's not that bad actually. But I feel a sense of forced rhymes, sounds like a rap song to read, though I'm sure you could add in the perfect music for it and make it kind of Jimmy-Eat-Worldish. Good lyrics? Not really.. But It doesn't take Bob Dylan lyrics to make a song. These are decent.
#4
hmmmm . . .
maybe not the best choice of words in some parts
i agree with blinnk16 for the most part