#1
Yeah so this is my latest one after a long stint of not songwriting so I'm sorry If it sucks

Supposed to be a sort of Metalcore/Heavy Metal song, I dunno if it acheives that or not, but its fun to play, real easy ****, oh and if anyone knows how I can wedge a solo of some or form in there please let me know

Thanks peeps
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mfns.zip
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#2
seems to me like its a lamb of god..... i don't want to say rip off but it sounds like a song they would put out.
#3
not bad, ive never listened to LoG :S
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#4
its pretty good, i liked it, the only part i didnt like was on bar twelve the lick at the end that was part of the irregular grouping, seemed almost out of place, kinda irregular, lol, but other than that, good stuff, crit any of mine if you get a chance, there all in my sig, thanks!
#5
thanks my friend
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