#1
I know, yes it's another anti-war song. But I don't care what people think. If you don't like these kinds of songs, then dont ****ing look or say that I hate that there are too many people writing these. But if you have an open mind, go ahead and read it at least.

There are bodies thrown out on the streets
another man dies, yet we cant admit defeat
The lie must continue, even though war cant be won
Everyone will die, before this is done

A man sits at home with his wife
Watching the news, he hears her cry
A helicopter crashed, Soldiers have died
There son Will never be able to say goobye

Why fight for dishonor
Why fight for a lie
This country is in disarray
As all soldiers die

The fire burns down the old streets
The family sits, then there torn from there seat
as a massive bang ripped into there room
Now there has now become a tomb

The real victims in this war
Are the people that believe that we're better than before
We are shunned from countries that liked us the best
But we still think we're better than the rest

Why fight for dishonor
Why fight for a lie
This country is in disarray
As all soldiers die

We laugh about living
We laugh about death
As peopling are killing
This is someones last breath

I love you mom
I love you dad
I loved my country
And all I had
But they used me in trust
They told a dirty lie
Now im not coming back
And more will die

Why fight for dishonor
Why fight for a lie
This country is in disarray
As all soldiers die
Last edited by Stairwaytofloyd at Jul 29, 2006,
#3
It seems that ever since American Idiot, too many people want to write anti-war songs. And they usually suck. But this one here was really good. The way you wrote the song made it seem really personal. I also loved the way it flowed. It just rolled off of my tongue. Keep up the good work, man.

Crit mine please

Serenade
#4
It was pretty good. I'm not all for the rhyme scheme though but it did catch my attention. Nice job. 7/10
©Ibanez4
#5
Thanks guys, im glad that you at least took a chance to read it, even though i do understand your point on the American Idiot thing. And yes, i have about 4 more songs on this board. Yea its a very personal song, one of my friends was killed in a helicopter crash in Iraq.