#1
So this is a new one, I'm pretty undecided on it, I simply cannot make up my mind on what to think. Crit for crit.

Don't you get that the sun never sets,
The world just spins underneath it?
You only like to be depressed
Because it matches the color of your eyes

And no, I'm not asking for the world
I'm just asking for you
There's no need to get lost
Unless I get lost in you

Can the sadness within your soul
Be cut out before you get old?
Can I make the incision in the bold
Stark night skies?

No, I don't need the world
But I'm pretty sure I need you
And I know me pretty well,
Yeah, I know me pretty well

And If we aren't who you want to be
Learn to be content with what you see
Park the car close to the curb, along with your dream
So your friends don't have to pull around you to get out

No, no, no, I can't hold the weight of this world
But I'm sure that you I could hold
And I'm pretty sure that getting lost in your eyes
Means I'll never get out

Swimming through stereos
What a way to go
And who am I to know
What I am talking about?

And no, I'm not asking for the world,
I'm just asking for you
There's no need to get lost,
Lest I get lost in you.

It's nothing special, just a smile that I want
And with us both on helium, isn't it a start?
I smell the start of something called "art"...
Or is that just shattered hearts waiting to happen?

No I don't need this world,
But I'm positive I need tou
And I know myself well,
Yeah, I know me pretty well

Your buning wholes with your bright eyes
In the silence of the night
Let's take some time to set this right
How about I come up for the weekend?
How about I come up for the weekend?

How about I come up for the weekend
And we could put off thinking about futures
Pressed in between sheets and smiles and lies
And we could run off into the woods, never be heard from again
Can't you feel my soul being poured into every word?
How about we get lost for the weekend?

And I'm not asking for this world
I'm just asking for you.
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Of course eating unbelievable amounts of anything can probably harm you, but i chose bananas because they look like willies.
#2
You only like to be depressed
Because it matches the color of your eyes


I really LOVE that line.

Sorry I can't give a full crit, but that line just hit home pretty well.
Looking for my India/Django.