#1
Mmm...

So, I decided to compose a song using a notation program (Finale), and here it is. It's my first time doing a midi song like this (I usually record manually), so sorry if it sounds kind of amateurish

http://horriblemusic.dmusic.com

It's entitled, "Malophonious".

Crit for crit
Last edited by yawn at Jul 29, 2006,
#2
Really cool.. I would love to hear your made the same tune with a cool Piano (clean sound) and maybe less synth or turn the volume down on it..

But cool tune u made there 8/10


plzz crit back http://rektum.dmusic.com/
#3
^ Ah, yes, the arpeggios are kind of overbearingly loud

Unfortunately I can't lower the volume of one instrument unless I lower them all...

I took a listen to Space Jam. Cool stuff, lots of out-of-this world sounds XD

Did you do that with a keyboard or something? Cause it sounds really cool; could even be used as background music for some weird sci-fi movie
#4
heh, pretty good... I especially like the beginning. I'm also watching pee wee's big adventure and right when I turned your song on the scene came on where he realizes someone stole his bike. it fit perfectly. I don't really have much advice to give... all I can say is I'd add some sort of percussion somewhere. nothing major, just some hi hats or a shaker or something in certain areas--but that's just me.

if you could crit mine, I'd appreciate it!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=402264
Banging on a trash can
Drumming on a street light
#5
^ Yeah, I think this would definitely benefit from some percussion. Unfortunatey, Finale doesn't allow you to add any extra instruments once you've started composing a song