#1
Hey kids.

Well before I succumbed to writers block, I managed to get 4 full lines of lyrics...Whoopdy-doo...But I want you guys to tell me if so far it's ok or not, so I know if I should start from scratch or just keep at it.

Ok the background of these 4 lines is, I'm really falling for this girl (cliched, I know), but she is taken buy this real asshole, but sometimes me and the girl hit it off real well, and I get the casual catch of the eye. And they are going through alot of problems right now...

I'll post the whole thing when I'm done...Someone wunna inspire me?

Here:

So won't you tell me; when everything ends,
Will you just pick it up and start again?
It's not like I plan on cutting in,
But patience only grows so thin.

END

Yeah not much. Think about it from my point of view though...HALP.
#2
New lines...Thank God..

You sit with shadow in your eyes,
in the arms of another guy.
Is it sad that this is true;
I'd go years for a minute with you.
#6
I like the first part. Not to fond of the second one. Dont worry about adding. It will just come to you when u feel it. I do that all the time. I only come up with four lines and then come up with another four until a long while afterward.
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