#2
well the vocals need a little bit more work,but i dont really sing so i wont go there but the guitar was good... so if the vocals were a little better, that would be a kick ass cover
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#3
Guitar sounds good. Vocals need work to say the least but at least your trying and if ya keep trying they WILL get better. Your phrasing isnt that bad. So dont let anyone tell you to stop.
Again Guitar sounded pretty good.

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#5
It wasn't bad. the vocals weren't bad, but the guitar was way too fast. take it easy, play slower!
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