#1
I'm not too sure about the chorus, mainly the first and last lines.


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I used to think there was a hunger
Wanting to obey the life I had when I was away
But now that I found you
I know I've found gold
And I know I wana stay


So my friend
There's just one thing that I must know
My friend
With you can I go?

*CHORUS*
You make me happier
You take me skyward
So can you take me up higher?
Can you make it the truth with you?

Sometimes in this world its hard to be
But often in my dreams I can see
Places we have not been
And places we have not seen
Better times for you and me
These dreams they never seem to fade
Coz I know with us they are safe

Some will try and take it all
But you must never let the stars fall
You see I know what I feel
And I know within us it can be real


So my friend
There's just one thing I need to know
My friend
With you can I go?

*CHORUS*
You make me happier
You take me skyward
So can you take me up higher?
Can you make it the truth with you?

Many miles to walk and talk
And many smiles to see
Many roads in our way
But one day its gonna be ok,
It gonna be real
#3
Don't bump! I'll let it go though because, i'm not in charge.

I think the verses are probably alright but I would chang the:
"So my friend
There's just one thing that I must know
My friend
With you can I go?"

To me, it seems awkward and a little simplistic. I have nothing against simplisity, but frankly, you have to spend a lot of time make good simple, and this seems to me like, quick simple. The "With you can I go" part seems a bit Yoda to me and I think doesn't really ring authentically with the rest of the peace. I think the choruses are the same too; they could use a little more work, some polishing and maybe a little more experimentation with the ideas.

Hope this helps.
Cheers
- PunkFish