#1
Okay this is actually the only love song I've ever written, or probably will write. I only wrote it as it's how I feel about someone. I don't know if I like it, or the repetition in parts of it yaddy yadda. But it's a start. I don't know if it will get put with music ever, since I'm sorta challenged with that part. I wrote it as it's how I felt/feel thing ya okay. Also parts rhyme, parts don't. I'm not sure if I want any of it to rhyme in the end, or whatever. A Bah. Anywho here it is.

Sensed it from the beginning
Knew that you were wise
Was positive you couldn't lie
Drawing me in with incredible force

To feel so strong about someone
To be able to sense something special
Hoping that in the end it will all work out
Knowing that this person is your one and only
The one and only - My one and only

They know how you feel
You want to make it happen
Making a move to further the passion
Finding that nothing happens but nothing

To feel so strong about someone
To be able to sense something special
Hoping that in the end it will all work out
Knowing that this person is your one and only
The one and only - My one and only

If only you could see what I see
If only you knew what's inside me
If only you feel how I feel about you
If only you would say you loved me too

My one and only
You'll forever be
My one and only

To feel so strong about someone
To be able to sense something special
Hoping that in the end it will all work out
Knowing that this person is your one and only
The one and only - My one and only

My one and only
You'll forever be
My one and only
#2
its good, sounds like you know what your doin basically, but i would just work on your rhyming pattern, in one of the paragraphs its like a aabb layout, but this is just my suggestion, that you should have abab, in this song you made it work out just fine though, keep up the good work