#1
I've never posted here before and this isn't a song but people post poems here too right? I wrote this a few days ago, enjoy:

I Will Let My Corn Die by not watering it

Day one today
I begin to let my corn die
No water for wicked roots
They are corn
What Rhymes with scorn?

Day two today
I lay them to sleep
Yes I do weep
No water for wicked roots
No ears for silly plants
Stupid blind corn
What rhymes with scorn?

Day three today
The green begins to fade away
Stay, no go, cellar doors, crack *****s
The corn laugh and cry
Fraternize, Paternize
Money, wicked roots
Plants that bear no fruits

Day four Today
Spoonfuls of hate
No love permeate
They exterminate
Why not germinate?
God damn me

Day five today
They weave and sway
A dance to remember
A life of Blues Jazz and Bop
Turned bubble gum soda pop
Pseudo watered down
Time square? Ya, square

Day six today
The corn begin to question
Interrigation? They wish
God has sense of humor
Humor deals in flaws
I don't flaw
God doesn't flaw
Contradiction

Day seven today
They want water
And impossible sainthood
Holy grails
Free will
Cosmic knowledge
This is the water they want

Day eight today
I repent
They were finding out
I gave them water
More life
Ended trife
Mercy for wicked roots
These plants that bear no fruits
Stupid corn
See you again
Next dark age
Stupid corn
#3
This was the same one on MX right? I've definitely read this over there before I left. (UG is definitely better with the S&L community, except for some)

Anyways, Ill get to it later
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#4
Quote by xArCaDiAx
This was the same one on MX right? I've definitely read this over there before I left. (UG is definitely better with the S&L community, except for some)

Anyways, Ill get to it later

Yeah I posted this on Mx a while ago and I just remembered there was the same forum here.
#5
Oh damn, this is good. I say "oh damn", because I was playing a Busta Rhymes song while I was reading it, and the flow was such that I could rap it over the beat. That was pretty cool. I like the repitition of "What rhymes with scorn?", and the way that, while you repeated it, you didn't overdo it. I found a theme, but I'm having trouble putting it into words, so here I go: It's about how society has "dumbed" down because people don't care enough to keep it "intelligent".

Oh, and would you please edit any of the songs in my signature?
Last edited by MastaBassist10 at Jul 29, 2006,
#7
that was great

God has sense of humor
Humor deals in flaws
I don't flaw
God doesn't flaw
Contradiction

best line in there
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