#1
god doesnt like scene kids...go figure?


he stumbols in wasted....to drunk
to realize is wife left him
and his kids despise him and he is to drunk to remember
the nights his dad abused him,to trashed to realized his appearance and actions


he hates himself for what he has done
he knows that the timer is about to ring
but still he sees through the bottom of the bottle


the road forked to quick to pick up the pace
and he is left living with the path he took
but living is barely what he gets
slured speech,recked hopes,and shattered dreams is all that is salavaged
#3
I really liked this song. I thought the subject material was very good. Too bad it was so short. If you could stretch it out a bit, I think you could have a masterpiece. Anyways, keep up the good work.

Crit mine please

Heaven on Earth