#1
About a week ago I posted my first recording. I was basically testing layering tracks and felt my way through the song (if it could be called that) and it painfully showed. I put a little more thought into it and re-recorded/mixed the instrumental.

Thanks to those who gave it a crit. It was all good advice, particularly using Rhythm Rascal. For those who listened and didn't crit, your silence was deafening...and well deserved. Thanks to all who suffered through listening to it.

Anyway, here's a much improved version.

http://bobbydeal.dmusic.com

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#2
Everything is too muddy. I'm not sure why, but I like the vocal effect. If its vocals I guess. Sounds like it. The eightnotes near the beginning are begging for a harmony part. I guess it kind of goes through out the whole song. The tone at the beginning isnt very good, but its hard to capture good tone through a Computer not intended for recording. I like it. DO mine now?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=403564
#3
that guitar in the very begining that plays throughout sounds horrible.the song didn't really sound like a song but just a way too long build up intro that goes no where.i loved that vocal effect.the whole thing sounds like something static x would do(that is definitly not a bad thing).but i got bored of hearing it early on but i think it would bulid into a good song if you took it there
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