#1
I really have no idea what this is about. I guess human greed. Or, cheap sex and beer .

They can't see
I think it's only me
Who see's the light
Never fights
Tries to tell them
But they never listen
Cause their to busy with

Cheap sex and beer
That's all they care
Can someone get me out of here
Cheap sex and beer
It's so easy
To find them surrounding their
Cheap sex and beer

Look through the greed
Connect the beads
And in the corner
You'll find he
Who walks alone
But feels at home

Cheap sex and beer
That's all they care
Can someone get me out of here
Cheap sex and beer
It's so easy
To find them surrounding their
Cheap sex and beer

If I could
I'd teach you and you
And who and who
But I think when it comes down to it
You won't even give a ****
Cause you're to busy with

Cheap sex and beer
That's all you care
I want to get out of here
Cheap sex and beer
It's so easy
To find them surrounding their
Cheap sex and beer

They don't mind
Cause they are a scumbag community
They don't see
That they have mortality
I LOVE YOU JESUS CHRIIIIST
JESUS CHRIST I LOVE YOU
YES I DOOOO
#2
Quote by lithium500
I really have no idea what this is about. I guess human greed. Or, cheap sex and beer .

They can't see
I think it's only me
Who see's the light
Never fights
Tries to tell them
But they never listen
Cause their to busy with

The theme of light and dark, and fighting it is very played out here. Nothing super creative to encourage me to read forward

Cheap sex and beer
That's all they care
Can someone get me out of here
Cheap sex and beer
It's so easy
To find them surrounding their
Cheap sex and beer

meh. that's just boring

Look through the greed
Connect the beads
And in the corner
You'll find he
Who walks alone
But feels at home

best sranza yet, I like the walk alone/home lines but I'm sure they've been said before

Cheap sex and beer
That's all they care
Can someone get me out of here
Cheap sex and beer
It's so easy
To find them surrounding their
Cheap sex and beer

If I could
I'd teach you and you
And who and who
But I think when it comes down to it
You won't even give a ****
Cause you're to busy with

Really bad just the use of who and who and you and you, and the profanity, it's just boring

Cheap sex and beer
That's all you care
I want to get out of here
Cheap sex and beer
It's so easy
To find them surrounding their
Cheap sex and beer

They don't mind
Cause they are a scumbag community
They don't see
That they have mortality

mortality is used here just for rhyming purposes and its obvious. So the people are dying?


Anyway, I would suggest adding a human element into it by descibing a person like this that you see and getting rid of that chorus because it is just silly.

You can crit mine if ou want All in all pretty damn good, the parts I ppointed out are definately keepers
crit mine if you want https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=402453
Jesse Wants To Die Just As Much As You Want Him Dead