#1
first of all, don't expect much, this is my first recording, and I haven't gotten the whole song down at full speed yet It's recorded through a cheap 5 year old mic and played on a frontman with a strat copy and therefore possibly the worst tone in existence (yes I do have an acoustic, except it was decapitated a few months ago)
HOWEVER, I'm posting this (sadly not for your enjoyment ) because I'd like some criticism on what I should be working on. This is the first song i'm actually learning for the sake of learning a song rather than picking up techniques etc, and since I haven't had much experience in it I'm counting on you guys to be critical of what I need to work on (I don't mind a few dozen 'you suck's as long as they come with something more specific and generally constructive ) to see if there's any hope for me.

(it's missing certain parts near the end, I was just messing around after the solo. Oh and did i mention my mic crapped out and the volume is dead low? yeah, forgive the torture )

one of the following links should work:
http://transdagger.homestead.com/files/nmp_-_oh_me.MP3
http://www.savefile.com/files.php?fid=5416913

thanks in adv please don't sue if your hearing becomes severely damaged
#2
Well it was good playing wise.. seemed like you really took your time learning it and it shows However, the guitar is slightly out of tune man.. the low E and i think the G from what it sounds like. All i can try and suggest is try to make some of the notes more clearer but other than that it was good!
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