#1
Verse 1:
I don't wanna go outside
It's scary outside
It's really dark outside
Plenty of places for monsters to hide

Chorus:
I don't wanna go outside
Into the scary!
I'd rather stay inside
With uncle Harry

Verse 2:
I'll stay in here where it's safe
I like to have my little space
Here I'm protected by Mace
So they cannot eat my face

Chorus


I like this song for it's stupidity. I had a chord progression and made these words up on the spot to it and me and my associate decided we liked it so we wrote it down. thats all.

McMahan/Helvey composition #5
Last edited by WOODnotes at Jul 31, 2006,
#2
HAHA

Its quite stupid, youre right
and i dont see any sense in all that but if you like it fair enough
But I think its really childish and emotionless
Didnt like it that much, sorry...
#3
wether i like this as a song or not is gonna depend on what kind of music it it... so... what kind of music is it?
#4
Do you actually have an Uncle Harry? If so this is pretty good but otherwise no.
#5
This would be an rollicking acoustic number, and no, neither of us have an Uncle Harry. But since uncles are magical I had to include an uncle in the song and Harry was the name that rhymed. saavvy? of course you are.

stay beautiful, WOODnotes
#7
Yeah, most of our songs are stupid and simple. I just have no real issues to write about.
#8
I'm getting a distinct: "uncle as a father-figure, but only because I find comfort in his arms, pedophile" vibe from this. haha

Actually, as I began reading it - taking it seriously, as should be done unless we're told otherwise at the TOP of the post - I began thinking of the song "Steven" by Alice Cooper. If done in a fashion such as that, with a few lyrical tweaks (Mace to get rid of Monsters? Those must be some lame a$$ monsters, and what's this uncle harry crap? haha) it would be pretty good I think.
#11
Thanx, we play only acoustic guitars anyways so it is good. lol MastaBassist10 are you like our unofficial crit/fan dude cuz you've crited every song of ours and so far you've liked them all. keep it up and we'll keep criting your songs. Peace, WOODnotes
#12
Quote by WOODnotes
Thanx, we play only acoustic guitars anyways so it is good. lol MastaBassist10 are you like our unofficial crit/fan dude cuz you've crited every song of ours and so far you've liked them all. keep it up and we'll keep criting your songs. Peace, WOODnotes

Well, I feel obliged because you and Dakmac are my unofficial fans. And you're a good writer, everything you write is so... insane that I have to like it.
#13
this song is weird but if you could turn it into a kind of punk song like NOFX how they just sumtimes write sum funny **** then it might be ok MIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!