#1
This song is for my friends who comitted suicide. Played on the piano. Hope you like it. Pls crit


I sit, inside your walls
And my heart beats a song
A song for the hope
That would keep my world together

I, I've been waiting for so long
But when you see me I'll be gone
I would have changed
The face that seeks the meaning

(chorus)
Sleeping awake
Before we know it might be too late
Fading away
We cant focus, we take lives away

I sit, inside you thoughts
Whisper words that you've forgot
Forgot how it feels
To feel like the way I'm feeling

Now, I scream you name out aloud
Maybe you'll hear me and be proud
Because what is left is done
And only I will know the answer

(chorus)
Sleeping awake
Before we know it might be too late
Fading away
We cant focus, we take lives away
#2
pretty good, and its nice to know that SOMEONE out there is writing from the heart.