#1
Well, here's the lyrics for the song I'm about to post the acoustic version of in the recordings section, so here goes:


THROUGH THE WINDSHIELD GLASS

As we drive through the darkness, as time leaves without us to follow tomorrow
Our wind holds the caution, our cares are aborted tonight, we ride
Neither angels of heaven nor demons hell up above us,
Above us,
No nothing could happen so soon as our dreams close to crash, and pass

[This is your final destination
This is where your life becomes a dream
This is where our adventure ends,
Through the windshield glass
We die tonight]

Be kick and we scream and we beg and we plead,
But we're done for,
The bending and breaking and screaching and cleaving
Above us,above us,
All the fires of heaven, the bright lights of hell down below me,
Down below me,
In the skies black and blue like the killing room born in my mind, in my mind...

[This is your final destination
This is where your life becomes a dream
This is where our adventure ends,
Through the windshield glass
We die tonight]
#2
I quite liked that there, I thought the chorus, or the 2nd and 4th verses were good, seemed quite poweerful and like meaningful

I thougth though that the first 2 lines of the first verse seemed a bit too long, i dunno maybe thats how the rhytm of the song goes like but they seemed liek they would maybe fit better as like 3 or 4 lines rather than just 2, especially the 1st line i thought this about.
#3
I can feel this as a song kinda in the style of the band Pillar, especially with the chorus. I really like the chorus, thought the verses were a tad long winded, but they weren't bad at all. What kind of music will this go to, cause I'd be really interested in seeing how it turned out.
#4
The reason the verses are so long is because the song's in 6/8. There's a lot I can fit in to each line

It's going to sort of goth rock by the way.
#5
Aidy i enjoyed that. Hope 2 hear another one of ur songs.
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