#1
This ones about lame ads, and corporate greed, ENJOY!


They cram the airwaves, with useless ads
The latest fashion, the lamest fads
Only one hope for the world to absorb
3 easy payments, and we are out the door

They ruin our minds, the only thing we have
Is another new product, shoved into our hand
If time is money, they must be rich
They wasted my seconds with a vitamin pitch

Ruin our lifes, waste my time
Burn down there buildings, and rape there minds
So that they stop with the hopeless taske
Killing our minds, we won't be the last

Refund the politicions, who fund the greed
To get the companys, all that they need
I dont need any candy, nor do i need a bike
I just want my time, with someone I like

I hate the money
I hate there face
I hate the tv they use to missplace
all of our thoughts, in an overpriced bag
And sell it, to misguided hags

Ruin our lifes, waste my time
Burn down there buildings, and rape there minds
So that they stop with the hopeless taske
Killing our minds, we won't be the last

They pay us less, every day
To work for them, in a monotonous way
Package our hopes, inside of a wrapper
But it's our lives they are after

Ruin our lifes, waste my time
Burn down their buildings, and rape their minds
So that they stop with the hopeless task
Killing our minds, and we won't be the last
Last edited by Stairwaytofloyd at Aug 1, 2006,
#4
hahaha. I love it. I'm getting this ACTUAL punk vibe from it. Not the sissy punk that we have now-a-days where it's all about the beer and good times and nothing about society and politics.

Negatives:
Maybe it's because I'm missing the meaning of the line, but this line seemed kind of forced to me - like you just needed that last rhyme to finish the stanza. "Killing our minds, ruining our past"

Positives: Well, what I said to begin with first of all. Also, it has great flow, and I absolutely love the line, "They wasted my seconds with a vitamin pitch."

This song seems just angsty enough to be rad as hell, and it's well written to boot. I like it. 8/10
#5
Thank you so much. I'm honored to try and revive real punk rock. How about Killing our minds, we won't be the last, would that sound better?
#6
Yea, it makes more sense and all that jazz. I think it would sound better with that alteration.