#1
This song is really F****D.... an acoustic theme, a nu metal riff, emo lyrics and screamning.... but well i think its kool... CRITS PLEASE!!!!!!!
#2
I liked the acoustic, too bad it's ripped straight from this: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=404106

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#3
the metal riff kinda reminded me of some kind of errie jaws-like theme. I like the tight bass riff after that though. Everything seems to go to together really well.
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#4
Yea I like the bass riff too, but the acoustic part is not his.
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#5
Wow, I've never heard so much dissonance in a single song, and it's not the good kind. Almost everything seemed like a mess to me, nothing sounded right except for the acoustic part. Maybe it's because it's not my style of music, but IMO I really didn't like it. Sorry.

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I liked the acoustic, too bad it's ripped straight from this: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=404106


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#6
it sucked and u stole it... yeah
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#7
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it sucked and u stole it... yeah


Yea it did indeed suck. Way too much dissonance, choice of notes not good, and the song does not fit together either.

oh and you stole the intro riff.


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#8
This song reminds me a dream I once had... A bunch of circus clowns were chasing me down an endless hallway.... I could hear the echoeing cackle of their laughter getting closer and closer...and closer....then finally one of them plunged an extremely large knife in my back... I think you should call this song, "Revenge of the Circus Clowns (The Day Bobo Snapped)"
#9
Not to my liking at all, this song is not really... well.. musical! There is far too much dissonance... take it from me man, I listen to death metal all day and this song sounds... rotten... besides, I'm no one to judge, but you should avoid allowing other songs to "influence" your work so much.