#1
wrote this bout 5 minuites ago. its about being afraid of the stalker but then turning into a fear of everything. meant to be a short, but very heavy sounding song.

in the bushes, you see his eyes
in the darkness, you hear his cries
on the phone, he breathes his lies

wanting what is not yours
this is what fun is for

after sunset, is when he tries
in the alley, his anfer dies
and the noises, moans and sighs

wanting what is not yours
this is what fun is for
creep lightly and shed blood
let it dry in the sun

in your head, is where he hides
in your dreams, ropes he ties
fear me now, the night skies
#2
kinda reminds me of Rob Zombie - creepy
might i suggest comming away from the AAAA style though?
i like it for the most part