#1
its just a rough draft i still have to change it up once the instruments are added

Verse

i'm looking at you lost but forgetting the thoughts i lent her
i cant recall her walking by and what the verdict renderd
theres such a lost space in my mind
i'm waiting to see what i'll find
when this all comes back together
i have to defend her

Chorus

Lost in life but never
said i'd do her any better
underestimating
is the key do contemplating
something you cannot go without
and knowing what shes all about
but when you finally realize
shes back to your new alibi

Verse 2

knowing what you could have had and seeing it be shattered
helping fix the problem leaving you left to unsolve them
its much more than a dream time
left at nothing but my prime
the only one left who is better
i must fight to get her

Extended Chorus

Lost in life but never,
said i'd do her any better
underestimating,
is the key do contemplating
something you cannot go without
and knowing what shes all about
but when you finally realize
shes back to your new alibi

Lost in life but never,
said i'd do her any better
underestimating,
is the key do contemplating
something you want so much it hurts
i cant deside whats coming first
but when you try to make it count
you forget what shes all about
#2
Good writing. Goos job. The only good advice you should remember is to stay away from the AABBCCDD rhyme scheme.