#1
heres just a look at the verses and the chorus

Verse

She calls out to me
in the middle of the night and shes crying
dramatically
she tells me everything that happened
between the two of us
i dont kno why i cannot here this
between the two of us
i dont know why

Chours

When you tell me this
number one on my list
watch the time pass by
hear the tears run dry
When you tell me this
i get images in my head
see the time stop dead
that can't be what she said

Verse

She screams out at me
early in the morning i'm lying
tiredly
i tell her i dont want to hear it
between the two of us i think she knows
i've finally had it
between the two of us
i know she lied
#2
Isn;t this your second one today??? You can only have one. All well this is good. Got some good points. Keep it up.