#1
it's an acoustic song, i'm more intested in the rhythm then the lyrics

Redemption

Verse
How can i know i've made a mark
when i can't even make a change
while i slowly drift off into monotomy
there no way i can see to break
whats come over me
but i guess thats something i just can't bring myself to ever quite believe

Bridge
am i destined for the same?
am i destined for the same?
seeking out a new name
struggling without change

Chorus
let me make a impact, let me try to learn
(though i have to stay hopeful, i have to stay hopeful)
please understand this cry for help you've heard
(though i have to stay hopeful, i have to stay hopeful)

Verse
I guess the reason for these words
though it should be plain to see is
i want to make a difference with my life
i want to be remembered
i want to be revered
i want have my name im books so everyone can read

Bridge
am i destined for the same?
am i destined for the same?
seeking out a new name
struggling without change

Chorus
let me make a impact, let me try to learn
(though i have to stay hopeful, i have to stay hopeful)
please understand this cry for help you've heard
(though i have to stay hopeful, i have to stay hopeful)

Verse
Please dont ever settle for
what other people have
You have to try and make it on your own
let me be the first to say that i admit that i
have not practised what i preach though i'm trying
#2
I like it. It flowed nicely. It be great acoustic song. Great job. plz crit my poem.