#1
Ok here is my 3rd song its got a Popish feel to it and i hate pop but o well. What do you people think?
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#2
i like it, its seems to me that it would be one of the better pop songs as far as the way it could be played and the way its written
i think you should add a bass and get a heavier version of the guitar in there towards the end and then end soft, thats just imo
good song though i liked it
#3
I cant play bass and my attempt to add it are really bad but i like the heaver to soft part
#5
Chromattack That last Part was supposed to be a diff song but im thinking of keeping it...Sorry but i cant crit you song i dont have Gpro5
#6
I don't think it's too pop. (I hate pop, too.) I like measures 13-16, the chords changes are cool. Measure 21 is a nice idea, but I don't think it will be easy to record, and if you do, it will sound like a mistake. Measures 24 to the end are nice. I would accelerando to the end. That would make it sound cooler.

Overall, cool. Keep going with it.

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Last edited by aprescott_27 at Aug 3, 2006,